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+#+TITLE: Ren Needs the Stuffy
+
+* Intro
+
+This is a story based in the First Contact Universe, by user Ralts
+Bloodthorne on the HFY reddit. The relevant chapter is linked below.
+
+[[https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/fne594/first_contact_rewind_part_seventyseven_nakteti/][First Contact Part 77]]
+
 * Part 1
 
 "Life isn't fair, sure I get it, everyone knows that. It's like the
@@ -30,33 +39,47 @@ jet black mane and a very much not amused look on his face.
 grin. "Come to tell these fine gentlebeings that they were wrong to
 arrest me?"
 
-"Stuff it Rin, you fucking headbutted the only working nanoforge in
-the town and somehow damaged it beyond autorepair!" Mark growled. "I
-don't even know how you didn't cave in your skull doing that!"
+"Stuff it, Ren" Mark Growled. "You realize you broke the only working
+nanoforge on this rock, the one we needed to fix the ship and get us
+moving?"
 
-Rin rubbed her head "Well it did hurt, but the damn thing wouldn't
-print my job!"
+Ren huffed and scowled. "All I did was give it a bit of a whack, the
+damn thing wouldn't print my job!"
 
-"You're damn lucky we need to depart soon, they'll release you to my
-custodoy." The guard beside him nodded.  "What the hell was so
-important that you couldn't contact the tech VI and ask what the
-holdup was anyway?"
+"You fucking headbutted the damn thing and cracked the inner chamber
+lining!" He exclaimed as his voice rose. " I don't even know how you
+didnt cave your skull in doing that!"
+
+Rin rubbed her head a bit, memory of the throbbing in her skull making
+her wince. "Well it did hurt a bit. What was I supposed to do?!"
+
+Mark rolled his eyes and let out an exhasperated sigh. "You're damn
+lucky we need to depart soon, the sheriff said he'll release you so
+long as I escort you back to the ship." The guard beside him nodded.
+"What the hell were you even trying to print? We already got the
+converter. Why didn't you just contact the tech VI and ask what the
+holdup was?"
 
 Her bold front disintegrated, tail curling between her legs a bit as
 her ears tilted down. "The stuffy..."
 
-"A FUCKING STUFFY!?"
+"Excuse me?" His eyes widened. "Did you just say a stuffy?" 
 
-"It's not just a stuffy!  It's the one that xenospecies captain that
-survived the precursor attack made, its SO CUTE! I needed it Mark."
-She protested, ending on a meek note. "It even says I love you when
-you hug it..."
+"Yea, the one that's all over SolNet, it's pretty cute!" Ren chirps
+cheerfully.
+
+"A FUCKING STUFFY!?" His voice boiled with rage.
+
+"Hey hey! It's not just a stuffy!  It's the one that xenospecies
+captain that survived the precursor attack made, its SO CUTE! I needed
+it Mark."  She protested, ending on a meek note. "It even says I love
+you when you hug it..."
 
 The hyena just stared at her for a moment before turning to the
-guard. "On second thought, nevermind. I don't need her out of there
-that badly.
+guard. "You know what? Keep her here, I don't need her back on the
+ship that badly."
 
 She looked on in horror as her saviour and the other guard walked out
-and closed the door. "YOU JACKASS! FUCK!"
+and closed the door. "YOU JACKASS! COME BACK HERE! FUCK!"
 
 The guard at the desk just smirked and laughed.